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PREMIUM DESIGNER READYMADE GOWN COLLECTION 👜

Gown Code: KA-1134

Designer Gown – A luxurious, high-quality gown designed for the modern woman who deserves only the best. This elegant piece is meticulously crafted with Zari-thread and sequins embroidery, offering both sophistication and timeless beauty.

Product Details:

• Fabric & Work: Faux Blooming Fabric featuring intricate Zari Sequins-embroidery
• Size Options: M (38''), L (40''), XL (42''), XXL (44'')
• Length: 55 Inches
• Flair: 3.5 Meters
• Lining: Full Cotton Inner, from Top to Bottom
• Sleeve: Short Sleeves
• Neck Type: Round Neck

Package Includes:

• 1 Designer Gown

Available Colors:

• Choose from 2 elegant color options.

This gown is the perfect combination of luxury and comfort, ensuring you radiate grace and elegance at any event. ✨

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